Here I lie remembering the unforgettable, the non-erasable, but yet desperately undesirable memory of your presence in my life...
When I discovered a new facet of my persona, a different human within...
When I learned to believe and live in my dreams and objectivity seemed to me like a sin
Here I lie going against your request to smile ever and live like I did never...
Not cribbing over the set "Sun" and recovering from the past burn
Here I lie, shedding what you disliked the most...
"Tears"; for the lost glee... the gloominess thats not letting me set free
Here I lie, waiting for a miracle to happen, a fancy to come true...
And make my life take a turn on the path that has its dead-end as you
The time & place to come when the unthinkable will take effect ...
And the longed and desired dawn will rise making life a picture-perfect
4 comments:
Hello readers ... although i started blogging to pen down the outcomes of seldom reflectivity that i experience and kept this initiative open to only a friends few but ever since my 1st post i have been receiving candid and encouraging feedback of a few other readers as well
I am deeply thankful to them and request all of them to leave me back a point of contact (say in the form of email for example) so that i can get back to them personally
I hope my posts never let down all my such enthusiastic readers ....
Yours Sincerely,
Forthright
it was very touching and deep. good thought and nicely put.
If you want to know how tough is it to comment on sacred and innocent feelings coming directly from the bottom of the heart- ask me.
The poem is the expression of the inner conflicts. The conflict is clearly represented by the use of the words “unforgettable” and “undesirably memory" simultaneously .Is it the conflict of feelings or the conflict between the logic and feelings? I’ll say that it’s the conflict of feelings originated due to the conflict between the logic and feelings. Each and every line in the poem is crying and saying that ‘somebody’ is the base of all happiness and inner peace but the brain says that he is not desired. Why? The simple reason is that heart knows no bounds, no limits and no constraints. But it’s the brain who not only considers the existing bounds but also creates new barriers for us.
The beauty of this poem is the simplicity with which it has indirectly explained the meaning and importance of true love simultaneously. The true love is nothing but the desire to see other person always smiling because all other feelings originate from this single desire. The poem also clearly tells us that we realize true importance of the true love only once it is lost. Moreover everybody knows that the “sun” which rises will certainly set. The best policy is to enjoy the gracious beauty of the nature without any objectivity till the sun shines in the blue sky. I think it’s most appropriate to end this comment with a line from your third blog....”Love is precious. Nurture it with utmost care”.
Oh! You had requested to leave email ID, so here it is, rohit.sx@gmail.com. Remember it is Just an email id:). And please keep on quenching the thirst of our artistic taste buds with gentle showers of your compositions..hope to see some prose compositions next time..
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